This essay was a six paragraph essay comparing the sympathies and differences between feudalism, which ended almost 217 years ago, and high schools in today's society. In writing this essay, I learned that feudalism and high school are similar in many ways, and that I need to make sure I have crucial sentences in each paragraph. The comparative analysis essay as a whole was my strongest essay, but my weaknesses in this essay were the omission of commas with compound sentences and the use of contractions. The comparative analysis essay helped me become a better writer by being more aware of not using contractions