The four essays I read were not boring at all because they talked about many different things and I feel like mine is boring. I won't put down what I wrote, but I feel like it needs a little more flavor. When I edit my draft I will add more details and explain why they are important. I will also write more about the tone of the article because I now realize that humor plays a very important role in "The Death of the Funeral Business". I talked about this in my draft, but you need to delve deeper into why it matters because I don't think it's much